First draft of the our thriller film

There are a few things we need to change about out thriller film. Firstly, is some of the editing. The scenes that are in black and white would probably look best if they were silent, with soft music playing in the background. With the reaction shots, it doesn't look like it is the same room, and so it would be better if we was to re film these shots in the actual rooms again. Also, it is a little unclear how cyberbullying, the main idea of our film, fits in. This is because a message is sent, and then a murderer comes, there isn't really a real reason the audience can see why there would be murderer. To over come this, we should film more memories of Billy and Shelby talking with me, the murderer, in the background looking angry/jealous to get it across clearly why the murderer was forced into murder. It may also be better if there was sound during the 'Sent' title, like typing noises as it appears, and maybe something when it flickers.

The majority of the film is done, all that needs to be done is a little bit of tweaking with it.